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                                    LETTER 2-3: RESUME COVER LETTER SENT IN RESPONSE
                                               TO ADVERTISEMENT (POOR FORMAT)


                             Chief Financial Officer
                             P.O. Box 425
                             New York Times
                             New York, NY 10000
                             Dear Chief Financial Officer:
                             To maintain continued growth, a company must have financial and management
                             professionals who are capable of identifying and seizing market opportunities before
                             the competition does.
                             My marketing savvy and management expertise can help you do just that. I possess
                             a powerful commitment to task, a drive for excellence, and the ability to respond to
                             customer needs. For example, in my current position I increased sales 74% by
                             upgrading service efficiency, resulting in a 25% annual increase in profitability. I
                             streamlined a branch outlet from ground zero, coordinating every aspect from
                             recruitment to organizing and redefining office functions, thus achieving substantial
                             cost reductions, greater efficiency, and increased market share. I reduced receivables
                             from 115 days to 33 days, thereby improving cash flow 21%. This released enough
                             working capital to enable the firm to expand into other markets. These achievements
                             are certain to prove both valuable in and transferable to a range of firms.
                             Because I am currently seeking to broaden my horizons, I eagerly await your reply
                             so that we can arrange a personal meeting. Then we can discuss in greater detail how
                             my particular blend of capabilities, experience, and managerial strengths can help
                             your firm capture lucrative business opportunities.
                             Sincerely,














                               But take this letter word for word, format it differently, and the results are as-
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