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110 How to Write Effective Business English
In order to use commas correctly, it helps to know that a comma
signifies a brief pause. Very often, people wrongly use a comma to
do the work of a full stop (period). For example:
I examined the computer, it had obviously been damaged.
As there are two complete statements here, not just a pause, we
could try a full stop: ‘I examined the computer. It had obviously
been damaged.’ However, this sounds rather stilted and a native
English writer is likely to use a conjunction to add fluidity. For
example: ‘I examined the computer and found it had obviously
been damaged.’
A comma is also used to link lists of items, groups of words,
adjectives, actions and adverbs. For example:
She listed, there and then, the things she would need for
her presentation: a laptop, a projector, screen, flipchart and
marker pens.
Apostrophes show where one or more letters have been left out of
a word. For example:
I’m = contraction of ‘I am’;
It’s = contraction of ‘it is’ or ‘it has’;
You’ll = contraction of ‘you will’.
Apostrophes can also show possession or ownership. For example:
The student’s rights = the rights of one student;
The students’ rights = the rights of students.
The general rule is:
apostrophe before the s (’s ) = singular possession;
apostrophe after the s (s’) = plural possession.
Unfortunately, English always has some irregular forms, such as:
men = plural of man; but the possessive is men’s;
children = plural of child; but the possessive is children’s;
its = possessive of it – yet takes no apostrophe at all!

