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15 2  ANSWERS, DISCUSSION, AND FURTHER ADVICE

       Exercise 2.6

      Claims a and c are explicit value claims; claim b has an implied value judgment;
      claim d is (probably) simply descriptive. Where is the value judgment in claim b?
      It does, of course, depend on context, but most people in contemporary Australia
      recognise that 'fat is bad for you'. Hence, claiming that some product contains fat
      connects it with this value judgment; equally, though, there are some situations in
      which fat is good for you (or at least better than avoiding it altogether). On the
      other hand, is there some value judgment in claim d? In certain contexts, the idea
      that 'white is pure' (and hence 'good for you') could be implied by this claim, thus
      making it, to some extent, a value judgment. If you found this exercise hard, you
      have done well: judging and identifying value claims depends, by and large, on the
      contexts in which we find those claims.

       Exercise 2.7

      Some examples: 'Because the road is wet [p], you need to drive more carefully
       [c]'; 'Because you need to drive more carefully [p], you should pay attention to
      what you are doing [c]'; 'I conclude that there was a rainstorm a few minutes
      ago [c] because Verity has just come home soaking wet [p]'; 'There was a
      rainstorm a few minutes ago [p] and so the road is wet [c]'. In preparation for
      chapter 3, think about the role of words such as 'because', 'I conclude', and so
      on.

       Exercise 2.8

      Conclusions a and d are appeals to action, with the latter involving a change in
      thinking. Note the disguised claim in the rhetorical question. Conclusion b makes
      a prediction. Conclusion c is an explanation showing how the conclusion comes
      about. Conclusion e is a justification on the part of the government for its past
      actions (as stated in the conclusion).

      Chapter 3

       Exercise 3.1

      Some examples of the way to rewrite them are:
      a    I was elated because, today, I found out that I had passed my exam. (Two
           claims now contained in one sentence.)
      b    I felt ill and so I went home from work. (Still two claims in one sentence but
           different way of signalling the conclusion... 'so'.)
      c    Thinking helps us to do better at work; and thinking improves our perfor-
           mance at university. So we better learn to do it! (Changing where the nouns
           and pronouns fit, and the order.)
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