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182                                Writing Winning Business Proposals


                            In rereading your draft, you realize that the second bullet probably should
                          have some discussion under it.


                          Composing the P-Slots for Task 4: Select the Most Appropriate Option
                          This task will help eliminate the uncertainty that must be disconcerting to ABC’s
                          team. It will reveal whether Metzger’s, Collins’s, or Gupta’s biases are valid. But in
                          the process, you know that a number of “pet” ideas are going to be “shot down.”
                          Only considerable agreement among the buying team on the criteria to be used
                          to evaluate the multiple options will avoid hard feelings and assure acceptance
                          of the selected facility option. These thoughts, which also focus on the theme of
                          consensus, help you formulate an opening P-slot.
                            For the closing P-slot, you focus on two crucial results of completing the task:
                          first, ABC will know precisely how to configure its manufacturing facilities over
                          time; second, the result of proper configuration will allow ABC to meet customer
                          demand throughout the forecasted period cost-effectively and responsively.
                            Your draft of Task 4 reads as follows:

                               Task 4: Select the Most Appropriate Option
                               Using ABC’s distribution model and Paramount’s proprietary models for assess-
                               ing expansion options, the joint engagement team will evaluate thoroughly
                               each potential expansion option and then select the one most appropriate.
                               Although the range of options will have been narrowed, those remaining
                               will quite likely be diverse. Therefore, we will work with ABC management to
                               develop both quantitative and qualitative criteria that will differentiate care-
                               fully among the various options, and we will obtain management’s agreement
                               on the one most appropriate.

                               Specifically, to select the most appropriate option, the engagement team
                               will:

                               ◉  define quantitative and qualitative criteria important to ABC and
                                 Consolidated
                               ◉  evaluate each option against quantitative criteria such as ROI, landed cost,
                                 quality, and customer service
                               ◉  evaluate each option against qualitative criteria such as manufacturing
                                 flexibility and potential risk

                               When this task is completed, you will know precisely how to configure your
                               manufacturing facilities over time so that you can meet customer demand
                               throughout the forecasted period cost-effectively and responsively.
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