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                           E-MAIL LETTER 4-3: NETWORKING—GENERAL TECHNOLOGY SERVICES
                   This enterprising rising star has used e-mail to get directly to someone in a position to help
                   or hire her. Her thoughtful and engaging letter is strengthened by the artful single-line teas-
                   er in the middle of the letter.
                                 From:          Shelby L. Paul
                                 To:            John Tiche
                                 Sent:          Monday, October 7, 20XX
                                 Attachment:    Resume for Shelby L. Paul.doc
                                 Subject:       Thank You for Your Encouragement

                                 Congratulations on the favorable publicity you received in
                                 yesterday’s City Times. I’m sure I’m not alone in finding
                                 encouragement in the description of your journey to senior
                                 management in the technology industry, an industry of which I am
                                 proud to be a part—although I haven’t achieved the success you
                                 have.

                                 Yet.
                                 As a hard-working, highly skilled, and dedicated Director of Client
                                 Services for a small software company, I am anxious to expand my
                                 capabilities by assuming greater responsibility. Mr. Tiche, I would
                                 greatly appreciate it if you could spare a few minutes of your time
                                 to discuss with me the direction that our dynamic industry will take
                                 over the next few years and what someone with my interests could
                                 contribute.
                                 I’ve attached my resume to demonstrate my commitment to hard
                                 work. I will take the liberty of contacting your office within the next
                                 few days to see if there might be a convenient time for us to meet.
                                 Thank you in advance for being willing to assist someone who
                                 would be proud to follow in your footsteps!
                                 Sincerely,
                                 Shelby L. Paul
                                 shelby.paul@newtech.com
                                 (123) 456-6789 home
                                 (098) 765-4321 work
                                 (111) 222-3333 cell








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