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532   Jonathan Newton


                          The interaction
                          Sara    … which leads me onto one other item which I haven’t got on the um
                                  agenda ah is it alright if I …?
                          Ripeka yep, sure
                          Sara    and that’s the um issue of writing [deep breath]. Um when, um when-
                                  ever you – er – we’re drafting, well, I’ve noticed a couple of mistakes
                                  creeping into our work. That’s stuff that, that even that I’ve looked at. I
                                  notice it because the letters go through – all the letters that go out of the
                                  ministry go through what’s called the day file. They also go through, er,
                                  each manager as well as our own staff. Sometimes suddenly as I’m re-
                                  reading I spot a spelling mistake which I didn’t see the first time or a
                                  grammatical mistake
                          Simon/Ella/Ripeka  mm, yeah
                          Sara    I really ask for all of you to make sure that you take it to one other per-
                                  son at least to, um, to look at before you, before you post it. Even when
                                  you send it to me to look at it must also be checked by others. Of course
                                  when you’re doing a big chunk of work then that’s normal for us t- – we
                                  always do that checking. Even with just simple letters make sure that
                                  they’re looked at. It’s so easy to overlook just a simple mistake and the
                                  less mistakes we send out the better
                          Ella    I’m doing that eh [laughs]
                          Simon yeah, kia ora
                          Ripeka I’d like to take that a bit further too cos if we’re going to use other lan-
                                  guages in the letters, make sure they are also checked as well okay
                          Sara    Kia ora



                          Notes

                          1. I am a member of the Wellington Language in the Workplace Project (LWP). All ref-
                            erences to ‘we’ and ‘us’ refer to fellow team members. I would like to thank in par-
                            ticular, Janet Holmes and Meredith Marra for assistance with preparing this paper for
                            publication. Nicky Riddiford assisted with valuable comments and insights on the
                            teaching programme which forms the basis for the analysis in this paper. LWP tran-
                            scribers made the material available for analysis. Finally, I thank those who allowed
                            their workplace interactions to be recorded. This research was supported by a Victoria
                            University Research Fund Grant.
                          2. For more details, see the Language in the Workplace website, http://www.vuw.ac.nz/
                            lals/lwp [Accessed 31 January 2007]
                          3. A fourth critical issue is, of course, monitoring and assessment of the effectiveness of
                            instruction. This however, lies beyond the scope of this chapter.
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