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Telling your story through social media  47

             We see social media used alongside, sometimes in place of, tradi-
           tional leaflets or mailing. Words even take centre stage in the fast-
           growing messaging via video. Every message has been (or should
           have been) finely crafted by that business. Being social offers the
           opportunity (and expectation) to talk not just about brand, prod-
           ucts and services but also to introduce personalities: the people
             behind the brand. There’s more opportunity for storytelling that
           resonates and a huge demand for customized messages to elicit buy-
           in or positive reaction. The word power skills system shown in
           Chapter 2 is immensely valuable, as the challenge (and the exciting
           part) is how to get your words heard through the noise. How to
           adapt, to keep up with the trends – and even create them.
             English has such an advantage, being used extensively across
           multiple platforms. But if English isn’t your company’s first lan-
           guage or that of your social media writers, remember points earlier
           in the book. Words that are right for your home market may not
           work abroad, even where English is the common language.
             As an example, let’s look at this wording on sportswear brand
           Adidas’ global website:

             Go get better, share your skills, compare yourself with the best and
             challenge your friends.

           It uses very clear wording, easily understandable on first reading.
           Let’s contrast this with wording used on their Adidas India website:

             Criticism and self-doubt can paralyze the most talented athletes. Only
             a rare breed converts the stones thrown at them into milestones…

           The language is rather more poetic and thought provoking. It re-
           quires a more sophisticated understanding of the English used.
             Coca-Cola is one of the most recognized global brands and it
           too adapts the English it uses across the world. So although we see
           the  social media hashtag  #PerfectCoke  globally, some  countries
           won’t necessarily understand #SwelterStopper used for ice-cool
           Coke or #SarapNgFirst – ‘the first time taste of the #PerfectCoke
           experience’.  This latter example purposefully features  Tagalog
           English to resonate with their target youth market in the Philippines.
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