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                          discussions of objectives, methods, qualifications, costs, and benefits. And those
                          discussions, like this one, are certainly not boilerplate, nor were they written by
                          a junior “just-happened-to-be-available” consultant who never met me. Clearly,
                          the writer developed his themes specifically for my situation.



                                               Where Themes Come From

                          You’re selling not in a vacuum but in response to my specific situation. That situation
                          is conditioned by what the buyers, individually and collectively, on the one hand,
                          and your competitors, on the other, bring to it. Therefore, you must (1) address the
                          individual needs and desires of me and each of the other buyers, (2) respond to our
                          collective needs and desires, and (3) counter your competition. These three actions
                          provide you with the three sources of themes: hot buttons, evaluation criteria, and
                          counters to the competition, which I’ll discuss in turn (Figure 7.1.)







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