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LETTER 5-47: RETAIL SALES—WORKFORCE RETURN
A focused, well-written letter such as this can put those of more experienced candidates to
shame.

Ms. Dorothy Gilbert Andresen
Blooming Brides RE: Your ad for
18 Main Street a Sales Consultant
Greenwich, CT 09876 City Times, 11/20/XX
Dear Ms. Andresen:

In presenting myself as a candidate for the position of Sales Consultant,
I present you with a valuable opportunity:

To hire an experienced, accomplished expert who can
simultaneously handle demanding, often stressed clientele
with kid gloves.
Having planned weddings for my own daughters, I am adept at dealing
with the multifaceted stress of the wedding gown selection and fitting
process. Patiently, I assessed the virtues of lace, organza, tulle, and
silk—the covered or off-the-shoulder design -- knee, calf, or floor
lengths. Gracefully, I balanced my daughters’ concerns with those of
their friends, husbands-to-be, even mothers-in-law. Delicately, I
increased our maximum budget as warranted to include all essential
accessories. Conscientiously, I maintained our selection and fitting
schedule. Unbelievably, I enjoyed it immensely—all four times!
Through it all, I was amazed to discover that my hands-on experience
proved consistently more effective than that of our sales representatives,
which is why I offer myself as a candidate.

After some time at home, I am now rejoining the workforce. I would
welcome the opportunity to meet with you. Please give me a call at
(555) 456-7890 day or evening so that we can schedule an appointment.
Sincerely,

Bea Bruner

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