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         reference.  This same idea can be applied to  computer-mediated  texts
        and writing assessment. On the surface, with the computer, a text and
        a student's writing process may appear  visible to the instructor, yet
        are writing teachers sure of what they  see? And if writing  instructors
        are not sure of what they  see, how can they  ever evaluate what  stu-
        dents produce?
           A mundane  text can also be considered transparent  in that,  politi-
        cally, the agenda or the ideas one has are fully visible to the audience,
        often  as frequently as the political message occurs in the  culturally
         salient text.  However, the  composing process of the mundane  text,
        especially on a networked system, may be considered transparent  in
        a  different  sense because the  inner  dynamics  of writing—the  plan-
        ning, drafting, revising, adding of graphics if on a web site—are gen-
        erally invisible for both the writer  and the  instructor  even  though
        the text is quite visible. Pamela Takayoshi at the University of Louis-
        ville noted in 1996 that through  cut-and-paste  techniques,  comput-
        ers  create  a  "seamless  flow  of text"  in composing  that  "dissolv[es]
        distinct segments of writing  processes" (p. 245) for a writer.  Conse-
        quently,  with  this  new  transparent  medium  compositionists  find
        themselves working   in a  state  of in/visibility. For every element of
        the  writing  that  instructors  see, there  are  distinct  sections  of  the
        writing  process that become hidden.
           If instructors  add hypertext  or hyperlinked writing to the  online
        classroom composing activities, then the transparency  of the text is
        made even more in/visible  in the process. The visibility of the  nonlin-
        ear  aspects  of writing  and  reading  hypertexts  increases  with  the
        webbed   structures.  Likewise,  the  in/visibility  of the  writer's  pro-
        cesses is established by the reader's decisions to select links in any  or-
        der—unless, of course, the writer deliberately locks in the linkages to
        follow a particular path. So, if a writer chooses to, she could replicate
        standard  textual  conventions  in  hypertextual  writing  situations.
        This would  make writing  assessment  easier for the instructor.  But,
        this process defeats the idea of multivocality  and nonlinearity  inher-
        ent in cyberspace and merely reproduces a conventional  text  struc-
        ture  on  screen.  Moreover,  assessing  a  hypertext  or  hyperlinked
        document   in the same manner  as a papertext  clearly misses the  full
        rhetorical, situational,  and contextual  elements of a student's  work.
           Therefore, the malleability of the mundane  text makes it an excel-
        lent  form  for  internetworked  writing.  As  Takayoshi  (1996)  ex-
        plained, even a simple piece of prose becomes a seamless production
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