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              246    |    Chapter 10                                              ACE Pro India Pvt. Ltd.

                                  Table 10.2  Common Usages of  ‘Make’ and  ‘Do’
                                  Make                        Do
                                  make a mistake              do good
                                  make a speech               do one’s best
                                  make a promise              do one a favour
                                  make an excuse              do wrong
                                  make haste                  do a lesson
                                  make fun of                 do a problem
                                  make progress               do business
                                  make an experiment          do exercises




                            Such minor errors can ruin your written communication. Given the con-
                            straints of space, here we have collated only the ‘top ten’. But if you avoid
                            these, remarkably clear would be your written communication.


              Sentence Clarity: Mistakes to Avoid
                            For good written communication, grammar alone does not help though.
                            Grammar can help you with parts of speech, their usage, and so on. What
                            you need in addition is appropriate communication. Hence, here we collate
                            a brief discussion of factors that affect sentence clarity. If you follow these
                            principles,  your  written  communication  would  be  able  to  convey  clearly
                            your message to its receiver, that is, your decoder.

                                i.   Avoid incomplete sentences.
                                  Sentence fragments suit the advertising discourse alone. If your writ-
                                  ten  communication  has  too  many  of  these,  it  will  not  be  effective
                                  either for your learners or for your colleagues.
                               ii.   Do not pack into a sentence two or more unrelated ideas.
                                  e.g., His brother was a sturdy fellow, and he was a good sprinter.

                                      Who  is  a  good  sprinter  here?  The  brother?  He?  Avoid  such
                                      confusion.
                               iii.   Avoid choppy sentences.
                                      ‘
                                  e.g.,  Naidu read our invitation. He visited our school. He saw for him-
                                      self the efficacy of the Froebel method. He praised us to skies.’
                                      Such chopped and cut-n-dried sentences make reading a tedious
                                      job. Avoid them. Instead write, ‘As per our invitation, Naidu vis-
                                      ited our school and praised our efforts to introduce the Froebel
                                      method of education’.






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