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LETTER 6-2: FOLLOW-UP LETTER—BANK OPERATIONS MANAGER

Ms. Anne Rice
Constitution Savings Bank
3 Constitution Plaza
Miami, Florida 30330
Dear Ms. Rice:
Reaffirms
Thank you for allowing me to present myself as a
candidate for Operations Manager, a prospect about connection...
which I am very excited. It was a pleasure meeting
you on Wednesday—and discovering our mutual
midwestern roots!
Given my background, I can understand the need for a
manager who can attend to detail without
compromising the division’s overall profitability.
Throughout my tenure with Merrill Lynch, I have
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worked to achieve these demanding goals. During the
by providing
past 10 years, I personally led the division to cut
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benefi
costs by 12% while improving our overall accuracy
rate to 98%. meaningful
to employer...
What this means for you is that as Constitution’s
Operations Manager, I can bring the same skill,
insight, and experience to motivate your staff to
improve accuracy, streamline costs, and increase the
effectiveness of the “back room,” bringing operations
to the forefront of the bank’s profit centers.
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I will contact you shortly to see when we might meet
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how nex
again to expand upon this vital goal.
step will
Sincerely,
occur.
Jim Williams
home (555) 456-7890

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