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22 CREATE THE STORY

Avoid Self-Indulgent, Buzzword-Filled Wastes of Time

Answer the one question in all of your marketing materials:
website, presentation slides, and press releases. The people
who should know better—public relations professionals—are
often the worst violators of this rule. The majority of press
releases are usually self-indulgent, buzzword-filled wastes
of time. Few members of the press even read press releases,
because the documents fail to answer the one question that
matters most to a reporter—Why should my readers care? As
a journalist, I’ve seen thousands of press releases and rarely,
if ever, covered a story based on one. Most other journalists
would concur. Far too many press releases focus on corporate
changes (management appointments, new logos, new offices,
etc.) that nobody cares about, and if people should happen
to care, the information is far from clear. Read press releases
issued on any given day, and you will go numb trying to figure
out why anyone would care about the information.
For fun, I took a few samples from press releases issued
within hours of one another. The date does not matter. The
majority of all press releases violate the same fundamental
principles of persuasion:

” Industries announced today
that it has signed an exclusive distribution agreement
with . Under terms of the
agreement, will be the exclu-
sive national distributor of ’s
diesel exhaust fluid.” Now, seriously, who cares? I wish
I could tell you how the new distribution agreement
benefits anyone, even shareholders. I can’t, because
the rest of the press release never answers the question
directly.

“ has been named 2008 Pizza
Chain of the Year by Pizza Marketplace.” The press